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Jeffrey Penguin

aka Stephen "James" Smith

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  • I was born on June 12
  • I am a lonely hero.
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  • You said you're having trouble finding what style to do it in. Well, I found the simplest style I could.

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  • "One of BB's dialogues while roaming outside the player's location is when he asks the player to help him 'become a real boy'. This is a referrence to Pinocchio, a living puppet who wishes to become a real boy."

    I don't play AR so I don't know for sure, but I've seen the voice clips on Youtube and I didn't see anything about BB really having any outside of the usual three we already had (and also: the page's "audio" section on this wiki doesn't have anything for AR voice lines). Was this some kind of mistake or is it something about AR that I just don't know about since I barely know anything about it in the first place? (asking because Youtube didn't help me)

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  • So about a year ago, before Help Wanted came out, a few people (Daly and Yanny-Yoo I think) asked me to write a quick story to predict what would happen in the game, since UM stories have made correct predictions before. I threw together two paragraphs in about a minute and called it a story, and they actually seemed to like it. And now, one year later, I decided to do something with it again, wow-

    So here it is. It’s not my most grand addition to the UMverse, but it’s something.

    And yes, this is my story for HW day, even though it basically has nothing to do with it. Accept it, it’s art-

    Also, since I usually will say this kind of stuff when posting stories, you know how I gave myself only four days to write Chance Meeting, and eight days to write Celebrate? Well now, this one only took three days. Gosh, why do I torture myself like this?

    Well that’s it from me. Enjoy I guess, and don’t forget to stop by the toy aisle for merch perfect for birthdays.

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  • I probably should have stopped by sooner but that thought didn't come to mind at the time. Anyway, I just wanted to see how you were doing since you seemed obviously miffed about something and the others except Freddy Fanatic didn't seem to think much of it. Whatever happened during the Campfire Discussion yesterday was unfortunate and I won't pry any further if you don't want to talk about it.

    Anyway, now that that's dealt with, you seemed interested in having some discussion about 5nafcirclejerk and the others didn't seem to have any interest in it (or just didn't notice), so I thought I'd bring that conversation here if you'd like.

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    • Fighting crime trying to save the world-

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  • Another anniversary, another story.

    This is the first time I’m going to recommend reading other stories before this one (unless you count Celebrate). I don’t mean all of them, but if you want better understand some of the little details in this story, check out Valentine and Stork. Though, the main premise of this one should still be understandable, so you can still proceed if you haven’t read them. I’ll leave it to you.

    Also, and I realize I say this for almost every story now, but this time, I’m sure at least someone isn’t going to be satisfied with how this goes. I understand that it may be a little controversial, especially to those used to the FNaF story. So there, I warned you.

    But I guess that’s all I’ve got. I’m not expecting too many people to read this, but if any questions arise, ask away and I’ll answer. And of course, I hope you can maybe enjoy it.

    Without further ado, here’s my barely FNaF3 story for FNaF3 Day.

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    • This is great. You really did a great job portraying William as an actual human being, rather than the flat William in the novels. I agree with Term that this is one of your greatest pieces, considering how well executed were the tones and imagery. Valentine also presents a sympathetic William, but Fallen is even more elaborate in that it also shows his wife's love (and through actions for that matter). No pressure but I would really like to see in the future how well you can also depict William's dark side while still keeping the tone that he is a desperate being. In conclusion, like always, you are an awesome writer and should keep at it.

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    • Thanks, I’m glad you like it. And yeah, I like it when characters feel real as well, which is why I like to take these kinds of routes with the stories. Plus, it’s a nice little challenge to make people feel sympathy for such an otherwise hated character in this series.

      I’ve also thought about taking a look at William’s bad side, though I’m not sure yet if I’ll necessarily make a story out of it. I guess we’ll find out in the future, for now I’m going to take a little writing break. Put a lot of effort into this one, so now I’m going to relax for a bit.

      But once again, thank you.

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  • Congratulations on four years here, Jeff.

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  • Sorry this is a bit late-

    Anyway, Valentine was good. 

    I mean yeah that's it, I enjoyed it. (Oh and I think the man is William?)

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    • Ah so you did read it, great. I’m glad you liked it, and yeah this emotional stuff is pretty much the heart of UM by now.

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    • Which is great, they're nice and bittersweet.

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  • Boop.

    Remember when I said First Night was going to be controversial and possibly unlikable, well this time it’s just... well, you’ll see. Take the warning.

    I just wanted to have some fun with this one.

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    • Splendid, I’ll drop off further information on your wall and we can go from there.

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    • Alright

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  • So. December 31st. Also happens to be the day I started writing UM all the way back back in 2015. Wow has it been a ride, especially this year. So, in honor of this special day, you guessed it, it’s another piece to the UM puzzle. Not an archive like last time, but a story.

    Plus, this is not just any old story either. Like with SoR, to those who’ve followed my series, this title may look familiar. Because this was actually supposed to be the first sequel to the first UM story ever. I always had the idea and basic premise, but could never really play it out, until I decided to remaster it for today. So yes, there are a ton of early concepts to this story as I struggled to find the proper path. Maybe I’ll share some later.

    I’d also like a little forwarding, like with last time. I realize this is a weaker entry, so it’s okay if you don’t really like it that much. Just putting it out there, I understand.

    And yes, there are secrets. I lied back in October when I said I wouldn’t add them anymore, but just don’t kill it like last time. Just enjoy things as they come.

    So here it is, the first intended sequel, now the tenth UM Bit.

    And now the ordinary message: questions may be asked, I’ll do my best to answer, all that you’ve heard before. Now I’ll leave it to you. Hope you enjoy, and happy 2020.

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    • Me-

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    • A job done correctly then, I suppose. I mean, he kinda was meant to be that “burden” character you’re going to have here and there. But heh, it made him pretty fun to write.

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