Room for One More
In the beginning they mention the previous security guard. He apparently died of a massive heart attack. I can’t tell if they’re covering for Michael or just some dude died.
Melissa actually has two kids. One is Max. We don’t know the other one.
I find it funny that Michael gets thinner as the animatronics climb inside but Stanley gets fatter. Hmm…
Final rating: 3.5/10
I didn’t like it. I liked some of the characters, particularly Melissa, but it felt very gross.
It was pleasantly short, which I’ll give credit for.
The New Kid
Mick: reddish-blond hair.
For someone who lives inside a horror story, Devon is a horrible writer. Within a few paragraphs, he’s gotten from exposition to climax, with the rising action nearly non-existent. We’re currently doing a short story writing project in English class, and the kids in my class are better than Devon here. Sure, we’re honors, but some of the kids really don’t deserve to be in “honors.”
Speaking of Devon, he’s f*cking creepy. He writes a horror story about his crush’s sisters to get her attention? No! Don’t do that. If someone wrote a horror story about my little brother, I’d report him to the authorities. There’s some dating advice; Don’t write horror stories about killing your crush’s siblings.
Heather is trying to boink Kelsey. Like, she’s grabbing his arm, holding his hand, trying to sit with him. And I quote, ““Come on. We can share the front seat. I’m small enough that we can both fit under the seat belt.” She giggled.” She sounds like a mix of Regina George and the Joker.
How the heck did a pizzeria get in the middle of the freaking forest. The other abandoned Freddy’s are in public places (ITP: turned into a different pizzeria. Fetch: abandoned building in a public area. Novel Trilogy: left inside a mall.) Who’s going to go to a pizzeria in the middle of the forest! Did it get abandoned and then trees were built around it? You know how long it takes trees to grow? This is gonna bug me so much. How did it get there? Fredbears was also in a forest in the Novels trilogy, so maybe Henry and William just built pizzerias in the middle of freaking nowhere.
Final rating: 7.5/10
I don’t know if it’s because I thought I might like it, but I actually kinda liked it. I really enjoyed Kelsey, Mick was decent, Devon deserves to have his arm eaten by a bear robot. Heather needs to stop flirting.
No, I do not understand what happened at the end. I heard one theory about it actually being in the beginning of the story. But the two characters at the end are described as wearing mostly black and hissing at their classmates. Devon and Mick would never do that. Devon maybe the hissing, but not the black.