I should’ve just made a separate post about this

We aren’t even talking about the lyrics now, this became a 100 ways to die type of deal

Come on give me a sample of something you’ve made, I won’t judge

Fine let's get back on-topic.

Fine, fine.

This is from like, beginning last year because I was bored.

Sweaty palms

Nervousness floods through me

Flashlight glare

God, paranoia never comes in handy

I should turn back

But I can’t

Not now

Hair raised

On the back of my neck

I think

Hands are grabbing my legs

And I think I cannot go further

But the voices say otherwise

Do this do that

At the drop of a hat

I feel controlled (for honest reasons, honey)

One step two step

If I mess up once more, eh, already got a bad rep

(Buried underground with no more sight or sound)

I’ve alerted them already, boss

He’s done for

He says he’ll help

Can I trust him?

I dunno, he seems nice (just take the bait, kid)

I think time is warped here

I still have so much fear

So, should I follow her downstairs

Or him to the back doors?

^^ Not bad. 👍

:D

Not bad not bad, and is it finished? If so you’re already better than me

Ehh, not really, about halfway.

What I did was like a third or fourth of what was planned

Ur better than me

I personally think your style makes more sense

Mine is pure “rhymes? Ehehuhibdiahish”